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Definition: dismal, gloomy

Synonyms: autere, bleak, hopeless, ominous

Example:

He'd had a stroke. I was fourteen and didn't know what a stroke was. I thought it was something you got from the sun. For me, the two weeks or so he was in the hospital meant I could hang out with my friends as long and as late as I wanted to, and I avoided going to see him until Mommy forced me to. I went in with my sister Kathy, and when we walked into his hospital room, it was a brutal shock. He was laid out in hospital white. His face was slightly twisted. He could not talk. He could not move his right arm or right side. His hand, a strong, brown veined hand that I'd seen gripping wrenches and tools and pipe fittings hundreds of times, was nearly limp, covered with IV gauze and connected to an IV. Mom sat by him in silence, her face ashen. Kathy, who was always his favorite, walked into the room, saw him, and backed away from him, horrified. She could not look at him. She sat on a chair near the window and stared outside, crying softly. He raised his hand to comfort her and made some sort of horrid, gurgling speech noise to get her attention. She finally came over to him and laid her head on his chest and wept uncontrollably. I walked out of the room, wiping my tears, staggering toward the elevator, covering my eyes so no one could see, as nurses and hospital aides backed out of my way.

- "The Color of Water" by James McBride 

Explanation:
 
In this passage, James, talks of the time when his step-father had a stroke and was in the hospital for weeks. The choice of words that he uses give off a vibe of sadness. The first sentence used "He'd had a stroke" is short and yet gives off a very sad feeling to the reader, and when he states that he does not wish to see him, and avoids him at all costs shows how bad the situation actually is. The situation presented seems horribly hopeless, especially when describing the stroke that occured "He could not talk. He could not move his right arm or right side" this shows how bleak the situation was, and how horrible a sight it actually was. When he describes the man's once strong hand gripping tools and building things, but now is not able to move at all shows how Mcbride wanted the reader to see how hopeless and sad the whole situation was

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